Exile's Journey

Hey everyone! #PoetryFriday hitting and I wanted to share a story. I used some visual inspiration for this one and hope that you enjoy it.

If you want something shorter and more emotional check out Apocalypse (a previous post).

Exile's Journey

Forty days

from the last oasis

you can see the City of Duhr.

A glimmering mirage

of white marble walls

bright

pristine

bold.

The sun turns the city into a lighthouse

in the desert

glowing ever more bright

through the

ash

smoke

fire

of the city's guardian

a titanic phoenix

hovering above Duhr.

No one can enter the City

without judgement

from the phoenix.

Only those with a soul to match the purity of the marble may enter.

I turn away from the phoenix

fearing it can see me

even this far

seeing what I've done

and left undone.

A few feet away from me

I see the tree

marked on my map

beyond the watchful eye of the phoenix.

Digging

digging

I shovel through the sand at the tree's base

as it is marked on the map

until I hit stone.

Brushing away the sand

I find the arch with the mark of the phoenix

just like she said I would.

In the arch I find

a weathered

beaten

wooden door

with a keyhole matching the key she gave me.

The door opens

to a dark hallway

with steps

spiraling down into the earth.

I light my torch and begin my descent.

Sunlight fades away as I creep down the steps

deeper

deeper

until the door above is unseen

and all my torch shows is more stone

and steps.

When the stairs run out

and the decline stops

I find myself in a water way

knee deep

torch fading in the dampness

water current gently

suggesting

I move forward.

My torch goes out

leaving only

the sound of trickling water

and cool current chilling my legs

to satisfy my senses.

The path forces me to a crouch

just like she said it would

as I crawl on my hands and knees

through the water

pressing my head up to gasp the ever thinning air.

A light in the distance

through the water

as the path now leads me submerged

to swim the rest of the way

keeping my body flat to push through the shaft

fitted for a much smaller man.

With a belly full of breath

I swim

fast

hard

pushing through the shaft

getting stuck

wiggling free

breath running out

as I emerge to the light.

The chamber is a grand cavern

water running into an abyss of blackness

lit by the glow of a flaming sphere hovering in the center of the pit.

The sphere burns even though I don't touch it

scorching away thin layers of flesh

a burn that hurts

yet

relieves the burdens on my soul.

A trail of flame ascends to the top of the cavern

where I now see it to be the tail of the phoenix.

She left me a ladder on the far wall

climbing

climbing

until the flaming sphere is but a dot

and the heat of the phoenix's tail turns my sweat to steam

I approach the top of the cavern

an open air well.

Stepping out the well

I see her waiting

bright

pristine

bold

in her ivory dress

wreathed in golden angelic wings.

She is just how I remember her

in life

before the treatments

before the tears

before the talk with the doctor.

She slips something into my pocket

another map

another key

another path into the City?

The phoenix watches us

it's judging eyes drinking in the misdeeds of my life

uncertain of the total accounting of my life.

Will I be cast out

again?

How long must I wander the desert?

What must I do to right my many wrongs?

When can I stay with her

forever

in the City of Duhr?

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Thank you for hosting #PoetryFriday to Kathryn Apel. Make sure to check out her blog: https://katswhiskers.wordpress.com/2019/08/30/two-aussie-verse-novels-and-picture-book-news/.

Let me know what you think about this poem or anything else I post on here.

Thanks!

Tim

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