Thieves

Thank you all for the great support I've received in this project. The City of Duhr was originally a one off, something I was just throwing out there but due to a lot of requests and feedback, I've continued the story.

We're building quite the backlog of stories now so make sure you start at the beginning. These are not meant to stand alone.

Here's where to start:

  1. Exile's Journey

  2. Outcast

  3. Waiting

This is #4 Thieves and I hope you enjoy.

Thieves

Shoving our ship

from angry waves to bursting swells

the Sea of Storms

lives up to it's name.


Half the crew is scrambling on the deck

battening down this or that

preparing for our capsize

the other half

praying

pleading for the strength to hang on against

gusts of wind erupting over the hull.


In this chaos

I sit against the hull wall

crashing waves washing away the crust and crud from my journey

a deluge dripping off me as I drink water from my canteen

the canteen I filled in Vezun

waiting

watching the running, the panic, 

the dwindling hope for a tomorrow in the crew's eyes.


Beside me

a man with no tomorrow

regardless of the ship's fate

his white cloak ripples as the water falls over him

his face down

hands outstretched, scorched flesh weighed down by

adorned brass manacles chaining him from wrists to ankles.


Checking my hand again

the hand with the golden glowing compass

from the golden eyed girl in Vezun

from the night of my beating.

Where there were once letters 

N, E, S, W

now only a circle

and needle pointing where I need to be

pointing to the man beside me.


I offer him my water

he waves it away

I shout over the yelling and screaming of the storm

"Not thirsty?"

he waves me away.


At port I saw him loaded onto the ship

more guards than ship's crew.

In whispers I heard him called the Phantom of Caliburn

quieter whispers told of his deeds

murder

loud barking from his guards made his fate clear

he's to be keelhauled off the coast of Caliburn

the ship's destination. 


If we survive tonight

Caliburn is tomorrow's port.


"Did you do it?"

I yell.

His white hood sinks lower

shoulders following.


"I've done a lot of stuff. Murder was never one. Didn't get caught for most I did."

I laugh

"But, maybe if I did get caught, caught early enough...

I wouldn't be talking to you right now."

Caught before the lies and drinking and endless attempts to be someone else

then maybe the City of Duhr wouldn't be so far out of reach.


"No."

A faint voice carries out from the hood

creeping through the crashing waves

the screams of those washed overboard

so soft and precise like a velvet sword.

"You'd still be here."

his hood turns towards me

revealing a face 

freshly mangled by a torturer's flame.

"People like you don't learn until you're here."


"People like me? What do you know about people like me?"


"You've been to Duhr. It's grace carries on you just like everyone who set foot in the City of Light, the City of Duhr. If you're here, you were cast out. You don't look like someone who'd leave Duhr by choice."


"What do you know of the City?

A murderer,

a thief of the worst kind,

one who takes what they can never return.

If a liar like me isn't allowed in the City of Duhr

the phoenix that cast me out

would devour someone like you."


He laughs into the storm

a madman's laugh

"I abandoned the path to Duhr long ago."

Lightning strikes the crows nest

igniting it to flames whipping with the storm

quickly crawling down the mast to the deck.

The man watches it creeping toward him

his face

serene

almost hopeful

"Why do you want entry to the City?"

he extends his feet to catch it

courting it to him.

"To..."

the words fall from me

another thought ignited by the question.

I knew why, to see Julia,

but is that why? 

After being cast out

so many times

I can see her every time for a moment

and moments can add up but that isn't why.

I've been trying to steal into the city for so long

I have forgotten the truth.


The ship's crew

those left on the deck

jump to the blackness of water in night

seeking a reprieve from the fire in darkness.


I sit

take another swig from my canteen

drinking it dry.

With nothing left in it, I stand on the ship's deck

looking to my hand

the compass still pointing to the man.


Boiling in me

the truth that has been sparked in me

that twists in me a sickness from the worse kind of lie

that you tell to yourself. 


Finally

the truth spills from me

"To take back what the City stole from me!"

Lighting whips through the sky

the end cracks with thunder shaking the sea

splitting the sky

for a moment revealing the Moon through a veil of clouds.


The Moon

white

pure

a gleaming coin in the storm racked sky

lighting the man's manacles exposing the manacles 

are unlocked.


He sees me seeing him

unbound.


Standing

throwing off his shackles

the man steps into the flame

kneeling down

the Moon eaten by the storm

steam boiling off his cloak

"Then do you want to get into the City? 

Or do you want to reclaim what it stole from you?"

His face lifts up

the flame catches him

curling up his body

he smiles

laugh like a man struck by enlightenment

vanishing in the smoke

silenced by the storm.


The compass on my hand

glowing golden

points to the stern of the ship

away from the fire.


I run the direction I'm told

no one is left on the ship

I am alone

again

and for a moment

I enjoy the solitude

quickly eclipsed by the joy of seeing the last life boat.


Sliding into the life boat

I cut the ties with a hatchet on board

dropping

to a swell's belly

rolling

drowning

emerging.


Reborn


The night passes

the storms follow

and I slide back the life boat's cover

take out my oars 

and row towards the Caliburn shore.

A few strokes in

I look down to my feet

remembering the burning man

seeing his shackles on the floor of my boat.

Remembering now

I grabbed them in my escape

the Moon suggesting I do so

and inside the brass shackles

engraved with the King of Caliburn's seal

was something roughly etched...

55, 89, 144, 233

Jackal Corner


With each stroke of the oars

the thought festers like an infection

red

angry

ready to burst

"Cancer didn't take Julia. 

The City of Duhr did.

And now

I'm taking her back."

If only I was so bold

when I was alive

I could have done more with my life.

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I hope you enjoyed this installment of the story. I think we have about 2 or 3 more stories in this tale so stay tuned. Subscribe to keep up with our exile's journey. After all the stories are told, I'm thinking about packaging this up in an ebook for everyone to enjoy. There will be some other stories like a tale of the Golden Eyed Girl and expect an appearance from the Phantom of Caliburn. 

Special thanks to our Poetry Friday host Laura Purdie Salas. Check out her blog here: https://laurasalas.com/poems-for-teachers/opening-of-snack-snooze-skedaddle-poetry-friday-2/

Your support and comments have gotten this story this far. Thank you! What I thought was a one off has turned into much more thanks to you all. 

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